Inspired by today's event, i've wrote poem. Hope you guys would like it, any comments would be appreciated.
by Kenishiro
Who Is She?
(02/07/07)
Who Is She?
___________
Who is she?
The one that caught my eye..
The one that i spy
She seems to be aware of me
And i wonder why...
Who is she?
The one that have captured my heart..
The one that caught me off guard
She seems to be interested in me
Couldn't figure out why..
Feedback: Yes, please. Constructive critism appreciated.
p/s: As seen on fictionpress.com/~kenishiro
by Kenishiro
Who Is She?
(02/07/07)
Who Is She?
___________
Who is she?
The one that caught my eye..
The one that i spy
She seems to be aware of me
And i wonder why...
Who is she?
The one that have captured my heart..
The one that caught me off guard
She seems to be interested in me
Couldn't figure out why..
Feedback: Yes, please. Constructive critism appreciated.
p/s: As seen on fictionpress.com/~kenishiro
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