Actually i've written this poem earlier this year, but i've only finished it last Tuesday. It sounded a lot like my previous poems, heavily on the secret admirer/secretly in love theme..hopefully you guys would like it, or perhaps use it in your love letter..haha..
My Beautiful Star
(26/06/07)
My Beautiful Star
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She is the distant star
She is out of reach
She is so far away
Yet she shines so brilliant
Seems she's closer than appear
She is high up
In the cosmic heaven
In the darkest of night
She shines so bright
And guide me with her light
As i gaze my eyes upon her
i couldn't help but wonder
How could i love her so
Would my love ever reach her
When she is the distant star.
Feedback: Yes, Please. Constructive critism appreciated as well.
My Beautiful Star
(26/06/07)
My Beautiful Star
_____________
She is the distant star
She is out of reach
She is so far away
Yet she shines so brilliant
Seems she's closer than appear
She is high up
In the cosmic heaven
In the darkest of night
She shines so bright
And guide me with her light
As i gaze my eyes upon her
i couldn't help but wonder
How could i love her so
Would my love ever reach her
When she is the distant star.
Feedback: Yes, Please. Constructive critism appreciated as well.
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