i've been having a difficult time to find something to write on this blog, so i began a quest searching/scouring through my note books, my pieces of papers, anything that can provide me with an inspiration to get me writing again, and i found a poem in one of my note books. i wrote this poem last year. i think, if i can remember it correctly, i wrote it under the *tragic* memory of my lost love..i channeled all my sadness and sorrow into a single thought and focusing it into a poem..
so here goes..
Tragic January (27/05/07)
My love left me
To mourn
This heartbreak
On a tragic January
She said it's pointless
To hold on to
This fragile memories
Of a tragic January
Oh how am i
To get over this
To accept bitter memories
Of a tragic January
Feedback: Yes, please. Constructive criticism appreciated as well.
Actually there's an alternate ending to this poem. i was having second thoughts about putting it in, as i wanted to keep the mood of the sadness flows entirely. so i left the ending out, if i put the alternate ending in, then the whole poem would feel different.
alternate ending:
* Yet, i won't give in
To this sorrowful feeling
I'll keep holding on
I'll make it through
This tragic January
so here goes..
Tragic January (27/05/07)
My love left me
To mourn
This heartbreak
On a tragic January
She said it's pointless
To hold on to
This fragile memories
Of a tragic January
Oh how am i
To get over this
To accept bitter memories
Of a tragic January
Feedback: Yes, please. Constructive criticism appreciated as well.
Actually there's an alternate ending to this poem. i was having second thoughts about putting it in, as i wanted to keep the mood of the sadness flows entirely. so i left the ending out, if i put the alternate ending in, then the whole poem would feel different.
alternate ending:
* Yet, i won't give in
To this sorrowful feeling
I'll keep holding on
I'll make it through
This tragic January
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